That was the most unabashedly hot fic. Wow, I am impressed by it. I have a soft spot in my heart for Yoruichi and Soi Fong. (Almost as big as Rangiku/Nanao). It definitely appeals to the audial and I can almost hear the moaning and crying. That is the allure of this, you make us -hear- what Soi Fong and Yoruichi are hearing.

Mad props