Practicially all the action in this is het, and while het is all nice and good, this is a yuri community. You should have marked this as a het doujinshi with a small amount of yuri in it. The way you presented it made it look like it was the main thing, which it wasn't.

Although I must admit that that one shot of Tatsuki and Orihime made me a very very happy fangirl. *-*